Cactus

July 6, 2010

Telephone Poles in Dark Sky Magazine

by Foster Trecost

I counted telephone poles sticking up from the ground and the seconds in between them. The old highway cut straight through the sand, and it seemed the road would go on forever. No curves. No hills. Just poles.

I’m not sure when she changed. After kids, I suppose. She didn’t smile very often, joked even less. I looked over to watch her drive. Not even a blink. Just a stare, dry like the desert, untouchable like a cactus. I wanted to say something, but I knew she only wanted to drive, to hide behind the wheel, an excuse to concentrate, a reason to focus on something other than me. Maybe I had changed, too. I went back to the poles.

She once asked me to keep her young. “There’s not much I can do about aging,” I said. So she asked me to keep her youthful. “That, I can try.” But the truth is, she’s the one who kept me youthful.

I remember days in the park, the grocery, the doctor’s office, it didn’t matter where, everyone we saw was someone else. We spent hours inventing stories about people, who they really were, what their lives were like. She got the idea from a Simon and Garfunkel song. “See that woman over there,” she said in the checkout line. “She’s having an affair with her tango instructor. Her husband knows it, too. But he’s sleeping with his secretary.” She looked at me, and waited to see what I would say.

“Do you think they know?” I asked.

“Know what?”

“Do you think they know that her tango instructor is married to his secretary?”

She kissed me, right there in the checkout line, for a long time. And that’s how it started. That’s how everyone we saw became someone else.

I tired of the poles and wanted to turn on the radio, but I figured no stations were in reach. I also figured she would turn it off if I found one. I wanted to talk or break something.

I must have dozed off because I don’t remember stopping. I woke to an empty car, still running, her door open. I jumped out, looked around, and found her standing in the sand some ways away. I walked to where she was but let her speak first. She stood in front of a cactus, prickly in bloom.

“They’re spies,” she said.

I waited.

“They’re spies from another planet, sent here to watch us. See those flowers,” she said. “Those flowers aren’t really flowers.”

It was my turn. “No, they’re not. They’re communication devices used to send information back to their home planet. Information they gather throughout the year.”

“Yes,” she said. “That’s what they are. Communication devices.”

I wanted to ask where she had gone.

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Foster Trecost began writing in Italy and continues today from Philadelphia. Paying jobs have him occasionally working within various aspects of corporate tax, with Europe filling the gaps in between. His stories have appeared or will appear in elimae, Pequin, Metazen, decomP, and LitSnack, among other places.

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1 Sarah July 7, 2010 at 9:59 am

AWESOME ! Makes y0u want to read more. When is the book coming out?

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2 Elizabeth July 29, 2010 at 1:16 pm

Lovely.

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3 Sara July 29, 2010 at 2:57 pm

Wonderfully written

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4 Ann Schoch August 1, 2010 at 5:18 pm

Foster,
I wouldn’t have dreamed you had this gift within you when we studied Italian together! You are terrific! Keep them coming!

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5 Dawn. August 2, 2010 at 1:36 am

This is the kind of story that stays with you. Very nice.

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6 Foster August 2, 2010 at 10:58 pm

Thank you all for these kind comments.

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7 Sandy Looby August 4, 2010 at 5:03 pm

Foster,
If this didn’t have your name attached to it I would have known it was yours anyway…just your style…keeps me guessing, thinking, dreaming…keep up the good work!

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8 gaydegani August 9, 2010 at 12:06 pm

Foster, I love this piece. I love its rhythm and the “who they are ” thread through this. The ending too really works for me. An ending yet not. Love it.

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